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Anons text isn't green but that's far from the worst. (thelemmy.club)
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[–] 26 points 1 day ago* (last edited 1 day ago) (4 children)

Why I gotta see this when I'm just trying to write honest to god d&d CONSENTacle porn?

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  • [–] 9 points 1 day ago (3 children)

    I'm sorry for you, having to read this.

    Keep up the good work out there, and stay strong, despite the obstacles, captain 🫡

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  • [–] 3 points 1 day ago* (2 children)

    If you're curious but I haven't got to publishing the porn bit yet and the first third or so is... somewhat violent (idk it seems like a normal amount of violence to me but other people tell me that's just because my childhood was fucked up and 0 violence is the normal amount of violence for most people...) Anyway they'll probably feel each other up at some point in the next few chapters but they probably won't fuck for like 10-20 more it's a pretty slow burn antagonism to partnership dealio

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  • [–] 4 points 1 day ago* (1 child)

    I almost unintentionally just read through some 5 or 6 chapters. Holy shit it's cool. Following all the theys and its and perspective changes is hard (maybe add a symbol or color to demarcate whose perspective we enter, on each change?), but the story delivers the emotional tension and beats so fucking well.

    The shadow of the underlying sexual tension is there by chapter 6, but I honestly don't care, I wanna read about hyper fantasy logic-vs-impulse blorbos learning to be trusting together <3

    Good fucking job, I'm probably reading the rest of it over the next days, keep being awesome!

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  • [–] 3 points 16 hours ago* (last edited 14 hours ago)

    Oh, yeah I've spent 15ish years trying to make my teenage tentacle porn fic make sense. I have the entire ending mapped out and a few random scenes drafted if you want more after you're done. I actually just wrote the actual porn bit I just need to finish the next ten chapters of escalating closeness to really make it pay off properly.

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