I almost unintentionally just read through some 5 or 6 chapters. Holy shit it's cool. Following all the theys and its and perspective changes is hard (maybe add a symbol or color to demarcate whose perspective we enter, on each change?), but the story delivers the emotional tension and beats so fucking well.

The shadow of the underlying sexual tension is there by chapter 6, but I honestly don't care, I wanna read about hyper fantasy logic-vs-impulse blorbos learning to be trusting together <3

Good fucking job, I'm probably reading the rest of it over the next days, keep being awesome!