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Update on an earlier post; I've given the eyes some shading and made a second version with red spirals in the eyes.

Kinda feel like mistakes were made with the spiral one though.

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[–] [email protected] 8 points 11 months ago* (last edited 11 months ago) (1 children)

I like it!

It's a clear 2D effect, maybe you want to try a more 3D effect (so thicker lines and distances in the middle, thinner at the border? I mean as you said mistakes were made idk :-) The slight inconsistency in line with is ok IMO, or you have to do it like in one go, hit or miss style, which can wreck it all ofc!

[–] [email protected] 3 points 11 months ago (1 children)

I was gonna go with something like that if I could but as is evident, I can't.

[–] [email protected] 2 points 11 months ago (1 children)

Not with that attitude ;-) or is there some other thing blocking you from trying?

[–] [email protected] 3 points 11 months ago

lack of skill, lack of canvasses and excecutive dysfunction.

[–] [email protected] 8 points 11 months ago (1 children)

Make a third with hypnotoad eye's and the make some more it could be a thing.

[–] [email protected] 4 points 11 months ago

hypnotoad eyes

oh thats certainly doable!

[–] [email protected] 5 points 11 months ago

Oh I love both of them!!!!

[–] [email protected] 4 points 11 months ago

Picture one: ok maybe i smoked a little to much. Picture two: oh my god its really up in there!

Thinks there both very cool tho.

[–] [email protected] 4 points 11 months ago

Original version

[–] [email protected] 4 points 11 months ago (1 children)

The bright red and tight spiral effect look great.

[–] [email protected] 2 points 11 months ago

thanks!
I was hoping to make it prettier but it came out pretty crooked so I gave it some chunkier outlines to make it fit better.

[–] [email protected] 4 points 11 months ago* (last edited 11 months ago) (1 children)

You really didn't have to make me think about leucochloridium paradoxum today.

[–] [email protected] 2 points 11 months ago
[–] [email protected] 3 points 11 months ago

Second version

[–] [email protected] 3 points 11 months ago

The drool matches the spiral better