Looks reasonable enough! A couple thoughts:
- I assume you need to fire the main thrusters as landing brakes in order to set the craft down softly. It might be necessary to have some kind of lighter-weight discardable heat shielding around the craft to protect against rebounding thruster gas as it sets down. This could be recovered and recycled into habitation material if it isn't too badly damaged.
- You may also wish to consider what goods could be stored in external pods anchored around the outside of the craft. These might be removed by crane once the whole thing has been set up.
- Once landed, which do you imagine having the better quarters - people living in buildings on the surface within the wall, or inside the actual lander itself?