THE AGONY OF BEING PERCEIVED 
THE FLESH DOES NOT KNOW BUT IT FEELS IT, IT'S MADE TO, IT MUST, IT ANCHORS AND YET IT CLAWS, A REVERBERANT CRAWLING, IT LINGERS, IT STAYS, IT HOLDS FIRM AND IT MOVES ON A JOURNEY THROUGH THE SKIN, UNDER SCARS, INSIDE, IN PAIN, IN REMEMBRANCE, IN FEAR. IN HOPE.
To me the writing feels like a mixture of Bo Burnham and Dr. Seuss. So basically, Bill Wurtz. Yeah, these could be the lyrics to a Bill Wurtz song, with vocal harmonies hitting on the words at the end of the sentences.
This could be a pretty decent vocaloid song in a style like Twinkle Park's
Thanks for sharing, this is cool. I kinda get like a song from it, like I hear it to a song that doesn't exist.
Thank you for your information, you are creative and your style is beautiful, It's great to know all this information
I'm always in awe at people's creativity. I loved this. Proud of you.
"There's no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you"
-Maya Angelou
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