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When you realize you found the player-characters.
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I know you’re trying to help, but do you understand how much negative comments like this tend to stick in a person’s brain? They’re doing their best, and although you intended to be helpful, your intention doesn’t matter much if the outcome is that they feel crappy.
He gave constructive criticism. It is not his responsibility to keep someone else's thoughts healthy.
Don't publish things without any sort of disclaimer if you don't want feedback that is not purely positive.
It may be that this feels more sensitive than it is because this is literally a comic about some characters with low senses of self worth who are fretting about other characters being "better" than they are.
@ahdok, just so you know, I personally didn't see anything wrong with the writing in this comic. I'm left with a strong sense of RomCom "oh my gosh just talk to each other!" Anticipation. :)
The "constructive criticism" here is "stop making your own stuff and pay someone else to do it for you".