writing
"There's no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you"
-Maya Angelou
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I think, at the start (like first 2-3 paragraphs) there is a little bit too many adjectives/maybe too flowery. And is color theme important overall? we get lots of descriptions of colors, but not textures/smells/sounds?
Thank you for your feedback! I see what you mean, I hadn't really considered the other senses for this chapter, it gets a little better later.