It's weird how the author somehow manages to define the word "elite" in such a way that excludes actually existing political elites (since those people are directly responsible to their organization)
Elites are nothing more, and nothing less, than groups of friends who also happen to participate in the same political activities.
... And then uses this idea to justify the integration of groups into a hierarchical party apparatus. There’s hypocrisy in criticizing informal elites while openly embracing a larger hierarchical structure and elites. Good luck holding the head of the party accountable!
Also, some of the principles in the essay directly correlate with decentralized principles of organizing anyway - delegation, limited mandate, rotation in particular... the only one not explicitly mentioned is instant recallability. I'd question 2 and 3 mainly. Especially given the party apparatus she’s advocating for... otherwise everything else is already done by “informal groups”
I really struggle to conceive the idea of a "fully structureless" group this is advocating against anyway. Any group of people coming together for any length of time, for any purpose, will inevitably structure itself in some way. We are people with different backgrounds and capabilities and ideals, after all.
I think overall though... the piece is mostly good. Past a certain size, you need to have formal structure and accountability with clear duties. You also need to anticipate that certain systemic oppressions are going to show up in your group and you need to have a way of accounting for this. I don't really see why this means every other benefit of decentralization and horizontality needs to be abandoned though.
Things are right when they make sense and follow logic and empiric evidence, not when a genius says them. Tell me what they said and we may discuss it, to simply say "oh but a genius said so" is meaningless.