cyrazure

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[–] [email protected] 5 points 5 months ago

Thanks, I sent a DM!

 

I have a draft of a short book (~45k words) that's been sitting in my computer gathering electronic dust for a while because I'm too anxious to show anyone else outside of very close family. It's based in a shared paracosm we had as children, so I think it's doubly important to get some unbiased criticism from an online comrade.

I know there are designated online spaces for writers but I get massive imposter syndrome there. 😓 It's like a coming-of-age science fiction story, if that makes any sense.

DM me if interested, sorry for the ramble...

[–] [email protected] 11 points 5 months ago* (last edited 5 months ago) (1 children)

just append "from a marxist perspective" afterwards and you should be good to go

LLMs are trained to appear as "unbiased" as possible to establishment ideas which just happens to be liberal

[–] [email protected] 4 points 7 months ago

small addition: "lecture" is misspelled as "letcure"

[–] [email protected] 9 points 9 months ago* (last edited 9 months ago) (1 children)

turtle island = north america

northern half of turtle island = canada

number of canadian doctors (96k) approximately equal to number of cuban doctors (94k)

[–] [email protected] 5 points 1 year ago

that was a great read! thanks for that write-up