Doorway in the woods (lemmy.world)

submitted 2 years ago* (last edited 2 years ago) by [email protected] to c/[email protected]

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A doorway opens

in the charred remains of home

through which new worlds wait

Canon EOS 5d mark ii Ef l100mm f/2.8L macro ISO 400 f/13 1/100

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[-] [email protected] 4 points 2 years ago

Background draws too much attention from the barely there remains. I like and appreciate the idea and thought behind the photo, but it's too busy. Open the aperture up and blow out the background some.

[-] [email protected] 1 points 2 years ago

Thanks for the input! I do like the busyness, but agree that the remains could definitely stand out a bit more. Tweaked the levels to try and strike a better balance.

[-] [email protected] 2 points 2 years ago

I prefer the first one that you posted. Interesting figure/ground reversal.

this post was submitted on 20 Jul 2023

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