A dark, fantastical tale that is intended to unfold a paragraph, or thereabouts, at a time.
On Publish0x:
https://www.publish0x.com/storytelling-in-paragraph-proportions/fragment-115-xplnxve?a=X7axkJW3ey
On Wattpad:
https://www.wattpad.com/1575859222-storytelling-in-paragraph-proportions-fragment-115
I don't know if you want to hear critique or criticism, so I'll just post the recommendations Wattpad had for me after reading this (which I think is the only thing I've ever read on Wattpad), they know me so well?
That's an odd set of recommendations... None of which have any bearing on the nature of my own story.
I suppose, that's simply Wattpad being Wattpad.
Yeah, it was quite strange, I was a little worried about where your story would lead based on these, but it didn't seem to go in that particular direction. Yet.
"There's no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you"
-Maya Angelou
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