S.C.U.D | CW: violence / misandry / horrorcore (hexbear.net)

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I see your face smiling
in this dark place
deep in the shadows
by the trees I wait

you walk you swagger
not a care in the world
you move through the night
big balls, you're bold

reclaim the streets
my blade, your meat
your smile fades
so pleased to meet

your marrow, your screams
the shuddering heaves
as the blood leaves your
body

realise, its no surprise
your hubris led you here
it's nothing new
another body due

tonight
the S.C.U.M
are back
and we're cutting up dudes

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[+] [email protected] 2 points 5 months ago* (last edited 4 months ago)

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[-] [email protected] 2 points 5 months ago* (last edited 5 months ago)

Fuck, thanks fam.

edit: to clarify "fuck" as in "fuck, that's a heavy compliment"

[+] [email protected] 2 points 5 months ago* (last edited 4 months ago)

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[-] [email protected] 2 points 5 months ago* (last edited 5 months ago)

Bless. I've been meaning to put my studio back together and start spitting again. been a minute since I even made a beat. I can recite this with the right tempo but yeah, bit of work ahead before I start putting anything out again. Half fell asleep listening to SALEM's King Night after I wrote the first draft of this. I've never fully appreciated how fucking incredible the drum patterns are on so much of that release, and understated lofi aspects of it.

It's interesting to process your observations in that light, I'mma go listen to Story 7 and check it out, been a min since an ex got me briefly into Clipping and I sort of associate that with her, but well overdue for a revisit.

I've been feeling like maybe I'll fuck around with something witchhouse adjacent when the time comes. Most of my stuff's been a chaotic blend of beats and noise with MPC swing in the past lol.

Appreciate the encouragement.

[-] [email protected] 2 points 5 months ago

Story 7

Damn. That went hard. Thanks for putting me back onto clipping.

[-] [email protected] 1 points 5 months ago

I haven't read the theory. Is this related to the comic?

[-] [email protected] 1 points 5 months ago* (last edited 5 months ago)

I have no idea. Unless you're talking about a comic that somehow shares similar influences to my references.

- fellow didn't read the theory-er

[-] [email protected] 2 points 5 months ago

The comic is about about a 90s cyberpunk assassin if I remember correctly. Which is unlikely. So it does have some similar themes possibly.

[-] [email protected] 2 points 5 months ago

Sounds totally unrelated but, unrelatedly, totally my kind of thing. I'll try to remember to check it out.

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