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[–] 7 points 1 day ago* (last edited 1 day ago) (1 child)

That's a good idea. The "probably" really is forced. Especially the second one. I think the "punchline" works better if the serious tension isn't broken early.

I DM'd you an edit I made, removing "probably".

I thought about posting it here, but I don't think we should get in the habit of editing people's coimcs to our liking and sharing them, probably.

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