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[–] 11 points 3 days ago (3 children)

I have this print in my apartment. It's almost perfect, and better without the context of who Minus is. I'd want to remove the "probably", then I'm happy.

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  • [–] 7 points 3 days ago* (last edited 3 days ago) (1 child)

    That's a good idea. The "probably" really is forced. Especially the second one. I think the "punchline" works better if the serious tension isn't broken early.

    I DM'd you an edit I made, removing "probably".

    I thought about posting it here, but I don't think we should get in the habit of editing people's coimcs to our liking and sharing them, probably.

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