I found a website of writing advice from a 'Writer & Editor'.... the articles are SO badly written (hexbear.net)

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Ok this is mean of me to post. Sorry Jessica Dall.

"A couple of years ago I touched on the issue of head jumping, which comes from poorly controlled POV in third limited (where a single scene slips between a number of characters’ POVs), but even with head jumping taken care of, some stories can still suffer from POV bloat–or simply more POV characters than the story can easily handle." – what a messy sentence.

"Short scenes are sometimes work well." – this is a self-described editor giving writing and editing advice.

"Pretty much anyone who’s read a book has probably seen narrative written in first and third person. Some people may have even seen a couple in second. Everyone has their favorite to write in, and generally read, but I’ve always been rather partial towards third person." – so much wrong with this writing. 'some people may have even seen a couple in second' sounds like about four people out there have read two texts in second-person perspective. 'and generally read' is awkward and the word 'generally' serves no purpose. 'I've always been rather partial to' is a cliché.

I wouldn't draw attention to it – there's lots of bad writing on the internet – but she's apparently a professional 'Writer & Editor' lololol

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[-] duderium@hexbear.net 1 points 1 week ago* (last edited 1 week ago)

Do you know about alyssa matesic on youtube? She’s damn near changed my life. Not sure which video of hers to link because I don’t 100% agree with everything she says but I do agree with most of it.

Edit: sea of lentils is a cool novel that switches between first, second, and third person chapter-by-chapter.

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