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[–] 22 points 4 months ago (2 children)

I’ve got the solution! Smaller chips, more air in the bag.

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  • [–] 9 points 4 months ago (1 child)

    The ceo grudgingly agreed to hold off on his 15 million dollar bonus for a few years so that they can lower the prices.

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  • [–] 6 points 4 months ago

    Unrealistic fiction. You have to make your characters more believable. Ex: The ceo begrudgingly thought about someone besides a shareholder for approximately 3 seconds, farted, then signed an agreement to kill another grandmother.

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