this post was submitted on 30 Jan 2025
181 points (95.9% liked)

tumblr

3569 readers
768 users here now

Welcome to /c/tumblr, a place for all your tumblr screenshots and news.

Our Rules:

  1. Keep it civil. We're all people here. Be respectful to one another.

  2. No sexism, racism, homophobia, transphobia or any other flavor of bigotry. I should not need to explain this one.

  3. Must be tumblr related. This one is kind of a given.

  4. Try not to repost anything posted within the past month. Beyond that, go for it. Not everyone is on every site all the time.

  5. No unnecessary negativity. Just because you don't like a thing doesn't mean that you need to spend the entire comment section complaining about said thing. Just downvote and move on.


Sister Communities:

founded 2 years ago
MODERATORS
 
you are viewing a single comment's thread
view the rest of the comments
[–] [email protected] 3 points 6 hours ago (1 children)

"They were coming." would be a much better final line.

[–] [email protected] 3 points 6 hours ago (1 children)

Mostly because it would be a full sentence unlike whatever we got in the OP

[–] [email protected] 1 points 17 minutes ago* (last edited 17 minutes ago)

Tbh, looking at it closer, I'm getting LLM vibes. Stuff like the weird, repeated punctuation happens a lot with those.