this post was submitted on 25 Jun 2023
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I get what you're doing with the composition here, but I feel like this would be a much stronger image if you cropped the bottom 15% or so, so like the first two diamond-shaped tiles off of the bottom. If you do that, you make the aisle look much brighter on average, which makes the image look brighter, which keeps you from having to bring up the darks as much.
That said, I do think that you need to be a touch brighter so that the geometry of the pews is visible, because all of those straight lines pushing towards the center will do some work in making the image look more interesting. I think there's also interesting geometry in the lights in the ceiling coming straight down, too.
I'll give this a try, i think the crop is definitely a good idea!
Here's an updated edit:
https://lemmy.world/pictrs/image/cd9f5b11-4d14-4035-9e52-fad20488f229.jpeg
IDK about you, but I find that much more effective.