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What a great question! I love thinking about this, so I spent way too long coming up with a response.
tl;dr: Have your primary industrializing nation (Alter-Britain) be poor in coal resources, rich in hydro resources, and decent at land management. Have your secondary industrializing nations (Alter-Belgium) be rich in coal resources. This way the steam engine is delayed and hydro tech becomes further developed and entrenched. Coal will still be needed for steel and this will get you that but at a lower cost to the environment overall.
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I am confident that industrialization is possible without fossil fuels, however it's quite improbable without magically making them disappear. Fossil fuels have a high energy return on investment (EROI). You are probably familiar with the fact that for most of human civilization, the vast majority were farmers that produced some surplus so that other humans could specialize in other professions. EROI describes a similar phenomenon. Whereas in Colonial America, 90% of people farmed to support the other 10% of the population, in Modern Civilization, something like 10% of the economy goes to producing energy required for the other 90%. EROI specifically is a ratio of the following:The following are the EROI of various energy sources according to Energy and the Wealth of Nations: Understanding the Biophysical Economy:
Higher EROI is better, and indeed necessary for various ways of life. For modern civilization, I think our EROI is 10:1 (or maybe that is just America specifically). The book argues that from 1560 to 1720, Sweden was a great power with productive mines that relied on abundant energy in the form of charcoal. The EROI on this biomass was 4:1 until the woods were over-harvested in the mid 19th century. Since then, mass migration followed along with the decline of Sweden relative to its peers. If the EROI is lower than 3, it is basically useless.
With that out of the way, let us consider various sources of non-fossil power, their benefits, and their drawbacks.
So it's quite obvious that this alternate timeline will have to rely on hydropower. It works fine for textile factories, which is what the First Industrial Revolution was all about anyway. Really, you need to stunt the development of the steam engine. In England, they didn't have enough wood, so they started mining more coal. The coal mines would be flooded with water, so they needed to pump it out. The invention of necessity was the steam engine - it used the coal and water already there to pump out the water. If the country doesn't run out of wood, that would delay the engine a bit (although the population will continue to grow, so I'm not sure if this could last). If the country simply didn't have much coal, that would be even better for hydropower. While steam engine development will be slow, water turbines will probably get developed much faster.
However, there are some issues. Steel production was THE thing in the Second Industrial Revolution, and I am pretty sure that will require coal coke. Direct reduction with hydrogen requires a lot less coal, but it's way more expensive and requires modern arc furnaces. Also, by delaying the steam engine, you are doing a terrible thing - creating a world without trains. Or perhaps pneumatic trains would be developed instead?
When electricity is discovered, electrification will probably proceed relatively quickly as it will be even more transformative. In this coal-poor, hydro-rich country, electrification would be great for transportation. Pneumatic trains cannot go far, steam locomotives are probably underdeveloped in this timeline and rely on imported coal or expensive domestic wood, and maybe there's a couple fireless locomotives that run off of steam produced by a solar thermal power plant. The flexibility of electricity will be a great boon to the bourgeoisie - something they missed in this timeline's 18th century when the steam engine was not developed. The state will probably start constructing gigantic hydroelectric plants as well.
OK it's literally 2:00 AM at this point and I have been working on this for hours so I am just going to finish this with some rambling. Here are a couple socialist scenarios for preventing climate change. If lots of socialist revolutions happen between 1850-1900, the planet is probably fine. Marx was talking about the metabolic rift and there was conjecture about greenhouse gases as early as 1912. Global energy consumption didn't explode until 1950, so plenty of time for socialist governments to do something. Also, if the Diggers somehow won the English Civil War and other peasant movements won in continental Europe, you might've had some weird not-capitalism kinda-socialism industrialization... it's an under-explored topic in Alt History in my opinion.
BTW I have no idea which countries fit this criteria.... Britain isn't exactly rich in coal but it's still evidently enough. Any other country and it's not just an alter-industrialization but a completely different timeline with a POD several centuries in the past... My gut was Bangladesh/India especially since their textile industry was pretty advanced in real life, but surprisingly Bangladesh's hydro resources are not good. Maybe the Congo as the first industrializer and the south African region following up? I think they fit the criteria well. And the tropical region is probably suitable for not-terrible biofuels. But the POD would have to be like a millennium ago.
Thank you for an incredible response. I plan to respond in detail in the morning but a few thoughts right now.
Of course! It was my pleasure to write it. 😀 Aerial tramways are really cool. You could probably power them with hydro, but the geography would be majorly constrained. Canals were also very big in Britain prior to railroads, and a bit less important in America. Canals would be even more important in this scenario. You could have canal trolley buses where boats are pulled along a cable powered by flowing water somewhere else. Check out this article. In real life, the cables were instead driven by steam engines. For passenger and freight shipping, there are several innovations in sail ships that could have been developed. Some ideas include improved sail design, rigging that requires less labor, catamarans, hydrofoils, and Flettner rotors.
Yeah a lot of scifi is dystopian and/or capitalist realist. And almost all socialist alt history is written by liberals and rarely ever hopeful. I'd like to write utopian literature in the vein of Looking Backward but I don't really know where to start. It's been years since I wrote (mediocre) fiction in school.
It seems like relying on waterways to travel and not being able to build railroads going west could have seriously slowed down colonialism in Western North America? It also makes me think of southern China. I just finished reading China: A History by John Keay, and I'm not retaining much, but the importance of watercraft in the south and horses in the north comes up over and over.
I'll try and read Looking Backward, sounds cool! I also have no experience writing fiction after public school. I guess there is probably a lot of content online to dig into for writing fiction for beginners we can look into... that stuff would also make good posting here.___
I skimmed through Looking Backward and its sequel a few weeks ago. It's kind of cool when the author ends up being right on the money when predicting future technologies like credit cards. Some of the concepts are pretty interesting as well like paper clothes becoming widespread (it was a trend later in the 20th century, and the idea of disposability being the future lasted another century). But the author is also a racist, so it gets weird. The sequel is open-minded when it comes to the status of women (they wear pants?!), but Edward Bellamy never got over his white supremacy.