Personally, I like the third photo the best. There's a good contrast between the dark, and the light. I do really like the composition, and how one gets the feeling of being in an antique store. Certainly the standout for me.
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Shot on Fuji X-T5, Fujinon XF 23mm and some Tiffen Glimmerglass 3
These are awesome, second shot is my favorite, so dreary
Interesting trio.
The first photo I like - horizontal and vertical lines everywhere and a clear line to the the centre and probably as well lit as possible.
The second might benefit from boosting the colour in the photo: I'm guessing your memory is of somewhere far more colourful. Other than that, I think the composition in OK.
The third doesn't work for me: I'm guessing the concentrated patches of light were what caught your eye, and I think there's a good photo lurking in there somewhere, but the stair railings and fuzzy foreground stuff are rather distracting.
Thanks for the critique!
2 tough call, I felt like it gave a flea market feel if I raised the saturation too much, I could have probably played with vibrancy more. Definitely a very desaturated scene in general though
3 I enjoyed the maximalist quality of everything here, sort of a lost in the crowd feeling
2nd photo - if you experimented with colour, then that's all I could hope for - it's your art, after all, not mine!
3rd photo - fair enough: I could certainly see there was something good there, and it's not like you could rearrange the shop for a better composition.