This is the last of my New Witch Comics for the year. Happy Halloween!

Bonus Panel: https://www.patreon.com/CatTrigger/posts/comic-not-so-173481300

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[–] 17 points 21 hours ago (4 children)

The author colored the text boxes, only thing more obvious would be a red circle and arrows...

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  • [–] 11 points 20 hours ago* (2 children)

    No it's definitely bad, it's like breaking the 180 rule in film

    And actually colouring the text boxes is not good either

    Lot of heart otherwise

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  • [–] 3 points 18 hours ago (1 child)

    I can see why the cartoonist made the choice: To keep the flow of dialogue balloons going, but I agree it makes it confusing, and there are better ways to do it.

    They may have realized their mistake by the 4th panel, but at that point they were committed to the panel layout and didn't want to rework the art or word balloons.

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