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Poetry

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A community to celebrate published and OC works of poetry.


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Guidelines & Community Rules

In addition to the general rules of lemmy.world:

Published Poetry

1a: Poetry posts should include the title and the author, when the author is known.

O.C. Poetry

2a: Sharing original poetry is encouraged, but it must be preceded by the tag "[OC]."

2b: If an [OC] post is requesting feedback, it should also follow with the "[FB]" tag. It would look like the following example:
[OC] [FB] Nothing Gold Can Stay

Feedback

All feedback should be given in good faith.

3a: All [FB] requests should be met with comments constructive in nature. It is okay to dislike parts of a poem, but make sure to explain why you feel that way.

3b: Feedback does not need to be extraordinary in nature. Simply expressing how a work makes you feel is often enough.

3c: Use the honor system. When you receive good feedback, return it in kind to another author. Everyone appreciates knowing their work is being read and appreciated.

As this community develops, these guidelines may be adjusted.


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UPDATE:
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In the interim, it is encouraged to post text poetry as you normally would, but to include a link at the beginning or end of the post with access to a website or image that retains the formatting as intended.


Other Poetry Communities
Poetry lovers unite! In the style of the fediverse, multiple poetry communities have arisen, and will continue to rise. I will try to keep a list here of communities across instances that are worth checking out!


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Late at een, drinking the wine,

Or early in a mornin,

The set a combat them between,

To fight it in the dawnin.

"O stay at hame, my noble lord!

O stay at hame, my marrow!

My cruel brother will you betray,

On the dowy houms o Yarrow."

"O fare ye weel, my lady gaye!

O fare ye weel, my Sarah!

For I maun gae, tho I neer return

Frae the dowy banks o Yarrow."

She kissd his cheek, she kaimed his hair,

As she had done before, O;

She belted on his noble brand,

An he's awa to Yarrow.

O he's gane up yon high, high hill -

I wat he gaed wi sorrow -

An in a den spied nine armd men,

I the dowy houms o Yarrow.

"O if ye come to drink the wine,

As ye hae doon before, O?

Or if ye come to wield the brand,

On the bonny banks o Yarrow?"

"I im no come to drink the wine,

As I hae doon before, O,

But I im come to wield the brand,

On the dowy houms o Yarrow."

Four he hurt, an five he slew,

On the dowy houms o Yarrow,

Till that stubborn knight came him behind,

An ran his body thorrow.

"Gae hame, gae hame, good-brother John,

An tell your sister Sarah

To come an lift her noble lord,

Who's sleepin sound on Yarrow."

"Yestreen I dreamd a dolefu dream;

I kend there wad be sorrow;

I dremd I pu'd the heather green,

On the dowy banks o Yarrow."

She gaed up yon high, high hill -

I wat she gaed wi sorrow -

An in a den spy'd nine dead men,

On the dowy houms o Yarrow.

She kissd his cheek, she kaimd his hair,

As oft she did before, O;

She drank the red blood frae him ran,

On the dowy houms o Yarrow.

"O haud your tongue, my douchter dear,

For what needs a' this sorrow?

I'll wed you on a better lord

Than him you lost on Yarrow."

"O haud your tongue, my father dear,

An dinna grieve your Sarah;

A better lord was never born

Than him I lost on Yarrow."

"Tak hame your ousen, take hame your kye,

For they hae bred our sorrow;

I wiss that they had a' gane mad

Whan they cam first to Yarrow."

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