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[–] 4 points 2 days ago* (last edited 2 days ago) (1 child)

That article is terribly written. Get to the fucking point, what do you want changed, what failed. I shouldnt have to read a dozen bus crash anecdotes before you get to the things you want fixed.

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TLDR:

They want:

  • stricter laws around what drugs bus drivers are allowed to be on, and better reporting.
  • better road design for the roundabout to slow traffic to 40 (bus crashed at over 56)
  • mandatory seatbelt notifications to be played to encourage passengers to belt up.

See ABC? That was easy to summarise.

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  • [–] [S] 1 point 2 days ago

    It's an article version of the Australian Story episode, so that's why it's not 'pyramid' structure. Their 'feature' style articles don't have a summary box at the top because they're not pure information-delivery.

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