▲ 3 ▼ [OC] Untitled poem of mine (programming.dev) submitted 2 years ago* by ExperimentalGuy@programming.dev to c/poetry@lemmy.world 3 comments fedilink hide all child comments When the words barely whisper And the songs known forgotten When the seldom well wished And a stone throw's the bottom When the once well trodden Is soiled down and sodden Accept the well wishes of ones who once wished And song without a singer like food without dish And sing those well wishes to your brother on a lake Stoning throws, hitting water, showing off for the sake
[–] Brimstone@lemmy.world 1 point 2 years ago (1 child) The composition is a bit AI like to me. Is it yours? permalink fedilink source hideshow 2 child comments replies: [–] ExperimentalGuy@programming.dev [S] 0 points 2 years ago* Now that you mention it, my style does sound kinda robotic in this poem. It is mine. I would show some sort of proof, but I'm not exactly sure how I'd do that. Edit: on second glance I think it sounds robotic because of the way I rhyme. The transitions aren't smooth in this one and most lines rhyme at some point. permalink fedilink source parent
[–] ExperimentalGuy@programming.dev [S] 0 points 2 years ago* Now that you mention it, my style does sound kinda robotic in this poem. It is mine. I would show some sort of proof, but I'm not exactly sure how I'd do that. Edit: on second glance I think it sounds robotic because of the way I rhyme. The transitions aren't smooth in this one and most lines rhyme at some point. permalink fedilink source parent