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[–] 7 points 3 days ago

There's another marker which is vaguer but really hard to miss once you get the sense for it: punchiness. Can't really give any clear examples but it's when it'll do a series of terse sentences, using "strong" words to make them land harder. "One crack, many impacts" when describing how thunder rolls.

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