“Kids These Days”

Written by: Gaia Violo

Directed by: Alex Kurtzman

“Beta Test”

Written by: Noga Landau & Jane Maggs

Directed by: Alex Kurtzman

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[–] 10 points 8 months ago (1 child)

Episode 1: with expectations at the bottom of the Mariana Trench (because I watched Discovery), I was not too disappointed by this episode. Was it good? Also no. I think the story is fine in principle, it doesn't unfold in a believable way, but not the worst we've seen in Star Trek. Other than that I was irked by what the captain says at 41:55:

make eh(?) your speed maximum impolt

Really, impolt, you couldn't do a second take on that?

Episode 2: quite a bit worse, the plot progressed for like 3 minutes in total, and there was a lot of that teen drama that wasn't interesting or amusing.

Overall felt like these were written by people who know a lot about Star Trek at a very surface level, and have a very TV-idea of what college life is like. I'll keep watching, for now. Out of franchise loyalty more than actual interest.

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  • [–] 3 points 7 months ago

    There were several lines in both episodes that I felt needed another take. Besides a few awkward pronunciations, I lost track of how many lines had strange pacing or weirdly-placed pauses in the middle of sentences.

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