On the one hand, non-binary people don't owe anyone androgyny: my own non-binary OC reads as pretty fem-presenting outside of xyr own fictional culture, but goes by xe/xem, You Can Just Do That. So if these two characters were real people, we hopefully wouldn't be complaining about them not looking "enby enough."

This is always the difference between writing a character in a particular way and a conscious human being choosing to act in a particular way. A character has no agency, so they'll be a collection of ideas that the creator has about that group, and if they aren't a part of that particular group and don't actually bother to research them and try to understand them, it will most likely end up with the character just being a bunch of stereotypes.

It's really frustrating, I apparently put more effort into researching and writing characters for fucking porn games than big projects with huge budgets like this do.