1: SailorSegaSaturn was not alone in taking far too long to realize this was a work of speculative fiction and I mean that as high praise.

2: In consideration of what you said elsewhere about aiming for the kind of softball coverage that major publications have given OpenAI, I think the fearful tone works pretty well, actually. It makes the overall piece feel uncanny and uncomfortable in a way that fits right into the way that this kind of deeply dystopian stuff gets normalized. Reading through this I realized that despite all the talk about inequality and playing God never being meaningfully rebuked by the Evolve people I was actually having a harder and harder time articulating my opposition. I actually appreciated the ending going in the same direction, and thought that the tension in that McLuhan quote was really interesting to explore.