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post bits of your writing and links to stuff you’ve written here for constructive criticism.

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submitted 1 year ago by SnokenKeekaGuard@lemmy.dbzer0.com to c/morewrite@awful.systems

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Would love any and all critique.

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[–] swlabr@awful.systems 3 points 1 year ago (1 child)

The title + thumbnail makes it look like you went to the olympic village while it was at its maximum output for bangin’. Which is funny. Will read later

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[–] SnokenKeekaGuard@lemmy.dbzer0.com [S] 2 points 1 year ago

Haha. I actually thought the image I put first would be the thumbnail but it wasnt. Thats actually a mistake lmao.

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