Hello! I wrote a book and I wanted to share the first chapter and get feedback. I have considered trying the whole nine and trying to get published, but I have a visual disability so editing is very hard for me, and honestly I don't think it's what any publisher is looking for anyway. If I get a good response I'll post more.

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[–] 5 points 2 years ago (1 child)

It's a bit rough around the edges, but I could see it being a pretty good read with a bit of polish. stalin-approval

Couple of typos that stood out.

Gotta remove one of the 'could not's here.

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