Overall pretty good, I like the lining up of some corp-on-corp violence which hasn't been seen in the franchise so far
One weird nitpick though
Her flashback where she's watching a movie with her brother... and it's fucking Ice Age, and not even the original but one of the sequels, took me out of it completely. One of the most crucial components to the identity of the series is the clunky 70s-style computer systems, which I just can't possibly imagine being able to produce CGI movies like that.
Like, is it suggesting that technology and culture in this universe matched the real world until at least 2012, and then just regressed back to clicky-clacky command line terminals everywhere? And also that kids would just be casually watching a movie that could have been over a hundred years old at that point? Peter Pan I get, cause it has a cultural position that's kind of timeless, but Ice Age?? It just doesn't feel like something that could exist in this universe, right?
Edit: Okay, I started watching the second episode and there's a callback?? Why would he say that? No one would say that! And then as she hacks the robot to deliver the response, Ice Age Sid fucking fades in to accompany the line???
How the fuck is this a real frame from the newest entry to Ridley Scott's Alien universe??? This is so jarring, it's like a parody except you couldn't make something this funny on purpose. There's obviously a narrative slot here for the 'shared media reference' that these two characters can use to communicate, but it should probably have been something with a little more, I don't know, gravitas or cultural permanence than the fourth entry in the Ice Age film franchise, and even then the execution didn't need to be THIS.
It's also making me notice how much of the rest of the script and scenario is really kind of contrived, when before I think I was blinded by the excellent production. But whatever, I'm sure I can ignore it and keep enjoying this slop.