I agree except you can't have something be "several times shorter". Yes, I know what you mean, but "several times" can only be longer. It's like saying "500% less". You can't do that. The best case scenario is that means "20% of the original" but arguably "500% less" would mean you take five times the original amount and subtract it from the original, leaving you with negative 4 times the amount, not twenty percent.
Anyway. This is just a light-hearted pedantic pseudo-rant, although I also do stand by the truth of what I'm saying. But I'm not intending corrections, just being silly about a pet peeve of mine. heh
hmm... that article might be better off being -4 times its original length, come to that. heh